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Story: Eric the schmuck ... |
wrecked_porsche
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Scythe
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The aliens were closing in on the truck. While inside, climax was building as the three humped away. The invaders plan on dissecting the truck for possible earth-species specimen, lasers were readied, vacuum sealed incubating chambers were filled with noxious sedative gas, and radial scanners on the ship's control confirmed targets to be three humans. All of the targets registered a read-out indicating accelerated pulse, gnashing teeth, abnormally profuse sweating, and weird inter-exchange of bodily fluids which the aliens found to be quite out of the ordinary and interesting. This excited the aliens to study their latest find all the more.
As the "leader" they call Pdjirmuk poised a skeletal limb to push an ornate button like protrusion on the panel that would launch the lasers, their scanners suddenly got jammed by a shrill sound emanating from the truck. A cry so intense that their systems went haywire. Red warning lights flooded the halls and corridors and aliens ran amok all over the ship. The saucer attempted by itself to activate protective shield but that too failed. The last recourse was to abort the earth mission. Automatic commands generated some precalculated coordinates launching a portal onto which the ship sped for escape. None of the aliens survived the holocaust which befell them.
Inside the truck, first one, then two, then three voices, (tenor, baritone, and bass) each an octave higher than the first, blended in a fatally deafening crescendo of pure adulterated ecstasy and bliss as cum spewed on wanton mouths and crevices. And they all weren't even aware (nor would they give a shit had they known) that they are all lucky to have cum a heartbeat before their fatal doom.
In the darkness of a dimly illuminated truck stuck in a state highway somewhere close to nowhere, three happily wasted people slept with smiles on their faces (and cum in their asses). 
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Jowi
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applauds Master scythe!!!! |
cyanx7
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"A cry so intense that their systems went haywire..." 
i beg to differ... this sounds a lot like Tim Burton's "Mars Attacks"...
what do you have to say 4 u'rself, scythe?... 
The garbage man is happy as a young maiden losing virginity...  I GOTTA GARBAGE THREAD WITH MY NAME ON IT! YEAH!  Shithappens just became my blood brother and Bjerkebanen my blood sister...  |
Scythe
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Well, um, I cant seem to do a story out of the current plot so I was thinking of maybe killing the aliens and getting on with the story without them. Mars Attacks was definitely on my mind when I did this bit  |
cyanx7
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GOTCHA!!! 
we have to be original, man!!!! 
it's disapointing... a promising chap like u... !!!! 
don't spoil the story like this... can't u re-arrange that bit? come ON!!!! 
The garbage man is happy as a young maiden losing virginity... I GOTTA GARBAGE THREAD WITH MY NAME ON IT! YEAH! Shithappens just became my blood brother and Bjerkebanen my blood sister... |
francine
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complain complain complain..... all you ever do is complain.... |
nocturnalchipmunk
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damn..you're good cyanx..  nice catch! 
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francine
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No offense cyanx, but even if you watched mars attack a gazillion times, no way you can write it better than Scythe you're on my side remember hombre! |
shithappens
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the constant buzz of mozzies irritates eric and he grudgingly awakes from his slumber.....it's still quite dark and he has every intention of drawing blood from the blood suckers that haf awaken him....he scans his surroundings and lo and behold...the humming buzz is not caused by mozzies......yikes!!!! he looks away in disgust.....the buzz's created from the air trapped in the concoction of bodily fluids and cum dripping outta his *happy* mates' arses......now that's one sight eric aint never gonna forget....he's heard bout cronic snoring but this takes the cake......the guy's snorin outta his ass and the buzz's loud enuf to wake a heard of elephants........it's getting brighter by the minute and his tummy suddenly reminds him that it's brekkie time.....wat better way to start the day than with a hearty brekkie....eric smiles....it's gonna be american brekkie for him this morning.....startin with the available sausages.......
True Bravery is arriving home late after a boys' nite out, wife waiting with the broom & u ask: "Are u still cleaning or are u flying somewhere" |
Scythe
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HEY! I said it inspired me to write my bit and it's just the voice doing the hay-wire bit that could be construed as unoriginal. At least I make up my own characters, and the plot and all. Geez man! Loosen up! I didn't have green aliens with big heads on my ship. Twas the least I could do to make the aliens go out of the scene, as if that's not harde enough. |
francine
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*francine in a dominatrux liquid latex outfit*
CYANX! apologize!
*francine back to her goody ol' self*
hey what happened here? ouch, bad headache
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Scythe
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talk about splits go change back to that dominatrix bit francine! Quick! |
francine
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hahaha! it's not yet full moon! |
nocturnalchipmunk
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ooo... francine! my preschool teacher gone bad... i like...
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Posted: 2003-04-12 16:47
Taste the rainbow, sweetheart!
