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razec
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Well then, please give her more bust size, and no it's not what you mean, It's not that i'm being "ecchi" or erotic but then again since she's quite tall she will need it  flat chested anime characters were typically the small frame-wide head "moe" ones (ex. kanade tachibana from angel beats! or the similarly looking Eucliwood Hellscythe from "kore wa zombie desu ka"). also pay attention to the chin width, cute tall girls usually have a little narrow ones (take a look at infinite stratos - they're all damn cute!)
Aside than those suggestions, i think you'll get much better on your next work. that's expected afterall thanks for giving life to this old thread mate!
[ This Message was edited by: razec on 2011-06-03 09:20 ] 10 years at Esato |
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reeflotz
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ok, great , will try to apply them on my next drawing  hopefully I'll be able to apply them and get better results, will post here when I finish another drawing.
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reeflotz
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new drawing, old character, trying to change my drawing style, it seems my older drawing style was a fail  because I was trying to mix manga style and realistic, now I'm just gonna focus on manga style.
@razec need your opinion on this
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razec
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From: Mars
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^^ Thumbs Up for the eyes! That's Na-Ga style you have there mate, the eyes were reminiscent of his works, well he's one of my most admired CG anime/designers and is responsible for my favorite Rin Natsume and Kanade Tachibana.
The drawing is much more streamlined, can you try shading the upper portion of the eyes as it would give the character more life, then if you CGI'ed it, try applying slight blur onto it, you'll like the results i bet. the hair is well done. just try to draw the guns in a 3D perspective. and then try to curve her body (as if striking a pose) to make it much better looking. Overall it's really nice looking already, I'm excited to the CG version of this!
Also, good luck with your studies mate, It's so nice to see a fellow pinoy here 
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reeflotz
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kabayan thanks for the critique . I didn't shade the eyes because I plan on doing a CG version, kinda got lazy with shading the pencil art and yeah I agree needs a bit more pose to make it look more interesting. I'll try spending more time on drawing the guns next time. Might take a while for the CG to get done but I'll post it here once it's finished.
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razec
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From: Mars
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Anime girls with guns have been quite popular these days so here's my new work
PS: the anime is so cool that i rewatched the first EP 7 times
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reeflotz
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that's great what anime did you watch? looks interesting, I'm gonna watch it too
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razec
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From: Mars
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Hidan no Aria, the first EP is EPIC, i just love the coolness of the protagonist there, the character is just like shana afterall, same voice actress but she's less tsundere than shana
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reeflotz
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the character just like shana? then I better watch it
anyway here's the colored version of my work, I really need to draw better guns, bullets, expressions and the hands 
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razec
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liked the blurring effects you applied on the wings, and the eyes are so angel beats! ~ish, or i should say P.A. Works~ish but that's one of the reasons i love that show anyway. you seem to have forgotten to color the eyes white
Anyway, Aria wields two pistols + 2 katanas. more badass than shana imho. also Kinji on Hidan no Aria is a far cooler/stronger male character than yuji on shana. also the hysteria mode is badass
[ This Message was edited by: razec on 2011-06-20 02:47 ] 10 years at Esato |
reeflotz
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looks like I did forgot the white color at the eyes , anyway updated it now, edited my earlier post, looks better .
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razec
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^^
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reeflotz
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watched up to ep 10 of Hidan no Aria, First episode is the most badass  then as I watch the rest of the episodes most of the time I keep on asking myself WTH AM I WATCHING?? lol I found myself sometimes lost on the tons of fanservice but it was epic anyway.
anyway for the topic I just made a very quick sketch, Cray version 2, nothing much, not gonna color this one, been busy nowadays.
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reeflotz
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well I suddenly found time to draw although it's still unfinished, this one I'm planning to CG.
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razec
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nice sketch, would love to see it in colours
Finally managed to finish Hidan no Aria, TBH the show needs a season 2 to fill up the unanswered questions, the 1st EP follows the manga hence the epicness, after that.... it became so so... still i enjoyed the epicness of Aria and Kinji's tandem
I can now start making my own CG fanart but it would take time due to work, i'll try my best to make it look well
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Posted: 2011-06-03 10:20
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