Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
Hi all Im a media studies student, I made this add over half a year ago, but was thinking of sending it off to sony and seeing what they think. I thought it may be usefull if I had some public feedback, so please can you give me some feedback on it, i dont care if you think its shitty, just give me your constructivie ccomments on this thread for all to see, Cheers Luke
It is normally a sharper image then that, but its been compressed by esato
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Posted by Cycovision
Pretty damn good!
Only criticism I have is that somehow, the 'pulse' logo just doesn't look quite right. I can't put my finger on it exactly, maybe it just clashes with the 'handwriting' font that you've used for the '30 hours...' bit.
Maybe you could re-design the pulse bit to make it a bit sharper, and try a different font for the '30 hours...' bit and see what it comes out like. Just my opinion, I'm no expert
Other than that, very impressive!
Posted by jenbones
Looks great Luke, just don't like the 30 hours writing bit, maybe make it more modern? Maybe sony will offer you a job
Posted by 50Cent
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i agree, it does look a tad out of place. You could change it to a for similar to the one used for the "sony style" in the corner
But other than that, looks VERY professional
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
Thanks very much, I agree with you, I dont really like the 30 hrs of music font, as it didnt match, but my fonts off my pc were deleted when i did a restore
and it was the most suitable as it connotes fun and excitement, which was an attempt to connote excitement for the player.
Regarding the pulse logo it is supposed to be blurred etc, It achually has a transparentcy on the shock waves then a radial blur on the pulse font, it was used deliberatly to make your eyes go a bit weird, I thought it may have attracted peoples eyes to the poster again as it give uncertainty.
thanks for your criticisms ive made note of them. Kepp em coming people
Posted by EastCoastStar
one thing i noticed, and the only think was wehre it says... 20 GIG... i would change it to 20 GB, but thats just my opinion