Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
Hi, can you please give me your opinions on this quick design. It is a brocheur to give to a few people and stick on a couple of walls up in the 6th form, doesnt need to be perfect, but would like to make it a bit better.
Be harsh i don't care
Posted by Jools
Looks fine to me! It's got all the info you need on there.
Just one tiny thing... the last 2 words are spelt incorrectly...
WARRANTY INFORMATION
and 'guarantee'
[ This Message was edited by: JoolsG4 on 2006-03-11 00:59 ]
Posted by Syrus_20
Looks good mate, way too good for my standards lol. Last year when I sold my 40gb 3rd gen ipod, all i did was hand write the damn thing on A4 lined paper and superglued it to the 6th form notice board
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
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cheers man, that means quite a bit coming from someone in your profession. Cheers for the pointer on spelling, I must admit I can never spell either words.
@ sysrus - I would do something like that, but im gettin 18 of these babies in all new and want it to look good (ish) im even printing on 150gram gloss paper lol
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
and there is the final version
Posted by JK
its information!! 
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
o well, overall, which one do you think is better? The reason I pust the black thing in the background was when printed it looked a bit empty, the only down side is on the print out it deposits to much ink on the paper, unless I user 250gram phoho paper
Posted by Coxy
2nd one looks better
Posted by JK
I dont like the font of the headline and the black .. thingy...
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
I feel that the headline will stay the same, its the most appropiat font on my mac, so I can't really change it. I asume you mean the black whole kinda thing? I f yeh, I think I see your point, but the thing is it looks empty without it and im not sure what else to put there, any ideas welcome
Posted by JK
Ok keep the ... thingy maybe try different colours, the blacks steals and camourflages the black walkman!
Posted by mcrosser
why not put a big walkman logo in the center ?? and some shadow on the models, as if they were on a desk or something.
Posted by Luke-the-magic-man
I can't really put in a walkman logo to the center as it will either mask the mp3 players or not be fully seen, even if I make it transparrent. I like the idea of adding a shadow, but have no idea how to do that in photo shop
Posted by Vein
I think change the font on the Sony NWA.... stuff
It's a bit different to the rest of it all. Too informal or whatever..
Posted by Syrus_20
I think it looks awesome mate, both of them do! Would go for the second one personally
Btw whats the font for ur title? The NWA part that is?
Not sure if you need much else, but if u wanna drop shaddow the models..well its complicated lol, im not no pro, just try to get around it
Try masking/cutting the model out of the original and into a transparent layer, then try adding a drop shaddow using the special functions thing by 2xclicking the layer in windows tab.
Hope it works lol, but i think it looks mint as it is mate.