My lil poem/rap song lyric

Posted by kramer_hpal
Here you go man, in 3, 2, 1....

I'm a poor student who has a web-page,
And it has a good design for a boy at my age,
You know, it is serchive, dont look me strange,
I like playing moblie games but no sewage,
Theres no way i use an N-Gage,
Cuz it's f..king Nokia Garbage,

Lalalalllaaa -- lalallLALAlaaaaaa

I was never rich enough to buy a C64,
But now i see friends buyin w-eight-double oh, ((supposed to be read as W800 and refering to SE W800i))
Once asked if i can try his new fone,
They just dirt their shoulders off,

Nanannnnnaaa nNAAnananana

Now im so lonely,
Looking for a girl near me,
They never managed to like me,
Cuz when they see my old Nike,
They just joke on me....

LALALALALALALLlllaaaa

I said "yeah, baby",
Im really poor,
If these guys will help me,
I will manage to go school,
So sad daddy cant see all,
Wish he had taught how-to drive a car before he go....

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My POEM / Rap Song Lyric:
MY POEM

[ This Message was edited by: kramer_hpal on 2006-05-15 07:36 ]

Posted by Jungle
Nice, make it with a proper backing tradck etc, might be worth a listen

Posted by max99
lol yea sing it 2 bking track or get sum1 on here 2, i'm sure sum1 on here knows how or can sing/rap